Publishing Fundamentals II: Book Proposals, Query Letters, and Pitches
with Elise McHugh
Genres: Fiction, Nonfiction, Poetry, The Writing Life, Novel
Online
Open to all levels
6 Sessions
Youâve finishedâor are close to finishingâyour book. Â
Now that your manuscript exists, you're primed for the next challenge: helping others understand what youâve created. Pitching, querying, and proposing a book are the art of distilling the entire universe of your workâand why it mattersâinto one or two pages. Â
Over six weeks, youâll learn to shape the core materials used in traditional publishing: the pitch, the query letter, and the book proposal. Each one asks you to think about your project from a new angleâwhat itâs about, who itâs for, how it fits alongside other books, and why it deserves a place in the market. Instead of treating these elements like an opaque set of industry expectations, weâll approach them as craft: structured, learnable forms that build on storytelling instincts you already have.Â
Each week, weâll look at a different component of the pitching and querying process. Youâll practice representing your project with a strong hook; writing an author bio with both personality and credibility; shaping brief and extended descriptions of your book; identifying your core readership; and researching competitive and complementary titles. Youâll also see how these pieces come together into a proposal that reflects the heart of your project while meeting the practical needs of agents and editors.Â
This is a hands-on, example-heavy course. Youâll draft sections of your materials, refine them through guided exercises, and receive feedback from both peers and your instructor. Along the way, weâll talk openly about what typically happens behind the scenesâhow submissions are evaluated, how these materials evolve over time, and how writers can approach the process without feeling swallowed by it.Â
Youâll leave with:Â
- A working pitch and query letterÂ
- The foundations of a compelling book proposalÂ
- A more defined sense of your bookâs hook, audience, and positioningÂ
- Practical tools you can return to throughout your publishing lifeÂ
Ideal for fiction and nonfiction writers who are drafting, revising, or readying a book-length project for submission. If youâre ready to move from writing the book to advocating for it, this class offers a supportive, practical path into the next stage of your publishing journey.Â
Publishing Fundamentals II: Book Proposals, Query Letters, and Pitches with Elise McHugh focuses on:Â
- Publishing & Professional Development: Focuses on submitting work, understanding the publishing industry, or building a writing career.Â
- Community & Connection: Emphasizes collaboration, peer connection, and social writing experiences.Â
What to expect:Â Â
- Goal-Setting & Accountability: Includes tools or practices to help students stay motivated.Â
- Project-Based: Students will work toward completing a specific project (e.g., a story, poem, or essay).Â
- Career & Industry Guidance: Focuses on navigating the writing profession.Â
- Lecture: Instructor-led teaching.Â
- Class Discussion: Facilitated class conversation.Â
- 1-2 hours of reading and/or writing outside of class.Â
Students say…Â
âI was referred to Hugo House by a former student. What I've learned from two classes with Elise McHugh has proved invaluable to me. My level of naivety was so great that I didn't know what I didn't know. Now I have an actual chance of being published. Thank you!âÂ
âInstructor Elise McHugh is an ideal instructor for this class; she's obviously worked in publishing for a significant amount of time and understands the processes and players. I enjoyed her teaching style as well, and felt she responded to extemporaneous class inquiries with charm and erudition. I was also impressed by how well she tailored the information to different types of writers (fiction, genre fiction, non-fiction, etc).âÂ
âThe instructor has current and extensive experience in publishing. She was able to answer every question we had with great specificity.âÂ
Registration Dates:Â
- December 2: Member registration opens at 10:30 am PTÂ Â Â Â Â
- December 9: General registration opens at 10:30 am PTÂ Â Â
- December 14: Last day of Early Bird discountÂ
- December 16: Scholarships openÂ
Elise McHugh
Elise M. McHugh is a writer, teacher, and editor based in Washington State. Originally from New Mexico, she is a senior acquisitions editor for the University of New Mexico Press. McHugh has published poetry and nonfiction in numerous venues, including New Mexico Magazine and ABQ InPrint and has taught poetry and publishing classes and workshops in a variety of settings. She holds an MA in creative writing from the University of New Mexico.
FAQ
Complete FAQEach class description includes a breakdown of what you can expect in terms of in-class activity, feedback, and homework (if any).Â
Generative means you’ll be generating new writing, either in class or at home between classes.
Workshop means you’ll be sharing work to be read and critiqued by your instructor and classmates and that you will also be critiquing the work of your peers.Â
Reading means you’ll be doing close reading of a work with an eye toward craft.Â
Craft discussion means you’ll be looking at the tools writers use to do that thing they do so well and then trying it out yourself.
Class levels are designed for various stages of the writing journey. Simply self-select the level that sounds best for where you’re at.Â
Introductory: This is your first creative writing workshop, first writing class since high school, or first foray into a new genre or form. Youâre looking to try something new, kickstart your writing, and/or establish yourself in the fundamentals.
Intermediate: You have a strong understanding of writing fundamentals and are eager to deep dive into craft. Youâre honing your writerly identity and voice through independent projects. In workshop, you look for constructive feedback and are ready to do writing and reading outside of class.
Advanced: Youâve written a significant body of work and have taken it through several stages of revision. Youâre getting ready to publish or are in the early stage of publishing, and youâre interested in refining the skills that will take you to the next level in the literary industry.
All Levels: You are any of the above and are looking to play with new possibilities.
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